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« on: August 19, 2010, 12:57:12 pm »

first of all when you ask a question you need to begin with a question word. so your first few sentences would read:

Are you so tired when you get home from work that you don't want to cook? Would you choose to wash dishes forever instead of cooking? Do you even know how to cook?

the next few sentences are correct. your next mistake would be: Frozen pizzas ARE not an option either.

just a suggestion; this next sentence is a run-on perhaps you could correct it by maybe saying: It has the dimensions similar to that of a microwave oven. (by using the word similar it means the dimensions are closely related but not exactly the same. thus eliminating the need for the explanation and shortening your sentence.)


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